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And here I will put my winning chapter ... Cristina! Narrated por Sandra
Hoy el día era muy aburrido… siempre era lo mismo, las mismas clases, las mismas personas, los mismo amargados profesores (Suspiro) sonó la campana, eso me alegro un poco, salí del aula y me puse a caminar por los pasillos del colegio hasta que escuche a unas chicas hablar
-¡Ha vuelto ha vuelto!- decían emocionadas
-¿Quien ha vuelto?- pregunte divertida
-Christian Gladius- dijo una de las chicas
-¿Quién?- pregunte con una mueca
-¿No sabes quién es?- pregunto la misma chica de antes
-No ... - I said boring
-Study here a few years ago ... it comes to caring for her sister, "said another of the girls
- And ... -
-Y ... is gorgeous! And I see your face when you see it, "said proud
-If yes ... of course," he said with a smile and then go skipping then the director interrupted my thoughts
-Sandra can you do me a favor? "He asked
"If clear-
-Jessica Gladius, could be your guide? I do not want to feel uncomfortable, "she asked
-Si light-well would step to meet this guy Christian
" Thank you told me and then she left, continue walking and speaking thought my head would have to go now as the typical posh ... " "We're not posh," I said, I approached her with a smile, "Hi, my name is Sandra, and yes, I read minds, I said" I feel funny. I'm Jessi, delighted "He said shaking my hand, I'll be your guide and your roommate. I hope you fall right, "I said smiling" Yeah, sure "She said smiling, I wanted to get into his mind but the guy who was behind it caught my attention, so this is such a Christian, WUAO if he was very handsome, our eyes were intertwined and he looked at me ... dumbfounded? I blush a lot, Jessi take it and left, lower your head and feel my heart will CARAMBA 10 000 per hour, I blush even more and turn to watch as the darkness disappeared, after which I completely missed again itself, take a deep breath and ran to my room, pulled out my diary (no one knows of the existence of my day) and started writing like crazy:
Dear Diary Gladius arrived today, Jessi will be my roommate I am 100% sure I will fall well and we'll be great friends, but I did not expect was that the Christian may be so ... so ... so ... WUAO! It's beautiful, looks like an angel from heaven, I love your eyes is so cute. I'm anxious to see him again tomorrow.
Atte. Sandra
closed my journal and keep it, then there was Jessica, talked and we fell asleep, the next morning to explain a few things and went to class even after a full day of class it was time my break, Till at last! I was walking down the aisle with three books in her arms, calmly walked up to a girl were running bumped into me, she and I fell to the ground, she swept across the ground hard, but I managed to straighten half and fell on his knees, look
- Want to look out your step!? - I cry, I look with a grin, so it's one of those girls mommy and daddy who believe the world belongs to them, I decided to ignore it, I got up and shook my pants - listening to me!? - I scream louder I went like I was not listening after a while she arto, he arose and went, I sigh, I bent to pick up my things, I was about to take my keys when one hand did it for me, looked up and ... No I can believe it! Christian Era, was even more beautiful up close
-Gra-thank you, I gagueando
"Nothing," he said with a smile, I got up and finished to collect my things and then give me the
"Thanks," I shy ... wait I? "Shy!? How long?, You look and my whole world turned me a bit dizzy and lost my balance, I almost fell backwards but Christian subject me by the arm and then I pulled my body to hit him, I blush immediately, "Lo-lo-lo-down feel much head and stepped back, but pull me back into the
- Who told you I wanted to get away? - Asked mischievously, that only managed to get even more nervous
-Christian-whisper Sorry
-Chris-corrected
- Huh? -
-Christian Chris ... Just tell me sounds very formal, "he said with a smile
-Chris-achieving
say" Thanks "he said with a tone of voice ... Normal?, did not give importance and me out a little from him, but I came to embrace - Can we go out any day now? - I wonder in whispers in his ear an appointment!
-Cla-Claro- le dije con una titubeante sonrisa –vaya que eres rápido- dije con una sonrisa
-Solo con las chicas que valen la pena- dijo orgulloso, se separo de mi y comenzó a caminar –Te veo mañana después de clase a las 4 "sin escusas"- mi grito
-Si…- dije suavemente a lo que se fue, me puse a pensar, de verdad era el Christian me había invitado a salir…. ¡AHHH! Me puse a dar pequeños saltitos, luego con esa misma energía me fui a mi habitación junto a Jessi, me recosté en mi cama y me puse a pensar, creo que Jessi no se dio cuenta, y no le di importancia, me quede dormida en unos cuantos minutos soñé, of course with Chris, he was so handsome, his eyes, his hair, his face, his body, ... AHH! Wonderful after a crazy dream I woke up Jessi suddenly woke up and got ready, the school day was long and tedious but the end just at 4 behind the library was waiting for me, I ran until I reach
greeting "Hi, I informally
" Hello "I said, gasping, running out of breath I had left
- we? -
" If ... we, "I said timidly, AHHH ! What is happening to me? How long I'm shy?, walk through the park to a nearby restaurant, to which we waitresses stare at him, "Sure why not?, however much it upset me, What is it Sandra? he is not anything of yours, it's just a friend you invite to dinner as friends, it's so hard to understand that in that one of the girls approached, it was very beautiful, her face was pale and had blue sleep eyes, hair as gold and wavy, and a spectacular figure, if I go under the self
"Good afternoon I am Mary Elizabeth and will attend this afternoon" I can help you? "- asked in a flirty, flirty
TOO-A table for two, "he said with a cold voice, that pleased me, made me feel I do not mind the physical appearance of the girl, Maria Isabel took us to a table, we sat down and she put the menu on the table I do not like at all how he approached Chris to leave the menu at his side, YAAAA! "What the hell is happening to you!?
- What would you like? - I wonder, you you I want, I
"Hey ... I want spaghetti" I said after reading the first thing I saw on the menu sheet, locked it and I focused not a fool in front of the
"Me too dijo, le hizo seña para que María Isabel volvía a nosotros, le pidió los dos espaguetis y dos refrescos, luego la chica se fue, Chris apoyo sus codos en la mesa, entre lazo sus dedos y apoyo su barbilla en ellos –Y… ¿Qué ha pasado con tu vida?-
-No mucho… ¿y en la tuya?-
-Tampoco… disculpa si soy entrometido pero… ¿Tienes novio?- eso sí que me tomo con la guardia baja
-Eh…. No- no está mintiendo
-Y… ¿Te gusta alguien?- siguió haciendo preguntas incomodas
-¿Por qué te importa tanto?-
- Why do not you answer? -
I do not know ... I think ... if I said at last putting
RED-Ummm ... Did you know? -
- Huh ? -
- if you know what? - asked again, did not know I was talking to him, Go dreamer!
"You have no idea who is right? - Said with a sigh
-would have the idea if I say so, became the holy
" I can not
- Why not? -
"Why not," he replied in a somewhat Agreco, in that I get the girl leave food dishes on the table and retired, Chris and I started to eat me, it was all very rich, try not to laugh but it was impossible Chris was playing with the spaghetti like a child, she looked so cute, to which we finished eating and Chris levamtamos we paid it all and then we walk until we reached a small park, this strangely empty because was very nice
"And ... I'll answer yes or no? - suddenly I wonder
- What? -
- Who is the guy you like? - hell again with the theme
"It ... is ... is ... - lower face, That I am a coward!
-Just say "
- CAN NOT! - Scream in fear
" Come ... I just want to hear his name, is it so difficult? -
-Si-
porfa- -
-E ... e ... are you "I said at last lift the face to see his face, his eyes were open as avocado and mouth also open
- Pe" But how ? -
"I do not know," whispers turned down his face this time was to not see my tears, pero de inmediato coloco dos dedos en mi barbilla y le alzo el rostro
-No le veo nada de malo a esto-
-Pero tú no sientes lo mismo- mas lagrimas corrieron por mis mejillas
-Claro que si… Sandra ¿Qué acaso no viste la cara de estúpido que puse cuando te vi por primera vez?-
-Sí pero…-
-Pero nada- me grito –Te amo- susurro, no me esperaba eso, pensé, luego pozo sus labios sobre los míos, tampoco esto, volví a pensar para mí misma, sus labios eran terriblemente deliciosos, poco a poco fui cerrando los ojos, el muy lenta y delicadamente little hands on my waist and I gently rub my hands with his chest, then his shoulders until you reach the neck, slowly kiss was so passionate, it was technically perfect, he was getting closer to me, little by little until the weight was on me and the two roofs on the ground, but that did not prevent us to continue with the kiss, quickly placed on me, the gentle pressure of her body with me loved it, it felt wonderful after a passionate kiss so I went running out of air, slowly spread your lips from mine and support my neck in his right shoulder began to pant
"That was something ... -
" Great I ended
"Yes, it was wonderful," she whispered, then we got the soil and dust ourselves off, I stare at the floor but pick it up when he saw the hand took me
- Will you we? -
"Hey ... yeah right," I stammered, we walked until we came to school the girls screamed and stayed with my mouth open to see me with Chris and we were tied hands, then after walking among all those eyes staring at we got to the door of my room
"Well ... see you tomorrow in class-
" Yeah, me too-
-Adiós-
-Adiós- peligrosamente se acerco a mí y dulcemente poso sus labios sobre los míos, no pude evitar suspirar de alegría, es que sus labios eran tan deliciosos, me perdí en ellos por completo, pero se separo de mi
-Te veo mañana- me susurro al oído
-Sí, adiós- me di la vuelta y entre a mi cuarto, Jessi no estaba así que me puse a saltar como loca y a dar pequeño gritos, era tan feliz, definitivamente este hombre me robaba el suspiro
FIN
Y aquí el magnífico capítulo Cristina!
Cristina: Today I will send the chapters, so you can read it ^ ^
Faniita
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